Pokemon: The Unlimited Story Series

What is it about? I'll tell you. It's about a Wartortle who sails the seas to become the strongest Pokemon in the world. He has a Poliwag for a wife, and with his Charmeleon best friend by his side, they'll encounter all sorts of things, including stronger foes, new places, and new adventure.

So far, I have completed a first edition, which can be viewed here: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1yOa8aevallQgtTvHzphWJcGf3rTTod0Y

I'd like feedback on it, if you would. I appreciate it!